The success is conditioned by efforts with few string attached.这个句子有没有错误啊,还能怎样改进的更好吗

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The success is conditioned by efforts with few string attached.这个句子有没有错误啊,还能怎样改进的更好吗

The success is conditioned by efforts with few string attached.这个句子有没有错误啊,还能怎样改进的更好吗
The success is conditioned by efforts with few string attached.
这个句子有没有错误啊,还能怎样改进的更好吗

The success is conditioned by efforts with few string attached.这个句子有没有错误啊,还能怎样改进的更好吗
有错误的哈~
1. A取决于B的表达是A is conditioned on B.所以这里介词用on,而不是by.
2. 然后Success不是特指某个成功,而是泛指成功的话就不用加the了.
3. effort表示泛指的努力,同样不需要加s.
4. 但是不明白您后面那个string attached是想要表达什么意思.如果是附带条件的意思话最好加个s.
这样全句就变成
Success is conditioned on efforts with few strings attached.
追问补充后面想表达的意思哈~