帮我看有没有语法错误,我感觉有,It is the second person that impressed me most among the five people he meet in Heaven,the Captain,who is revealed to be the person shot Eddie in the leg,crippling him for life.

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帮我看有没有语法错误,我感觉有,It is the second person that impressed me most among the five people he meet in Heaven,the Captain,who is revealed to be the person shot Eddie in the leg,crippling him for life.

帮我看有没有语法错误,我感觉有,It is the second person that impressed me most among the five people he meet in Heaven,the Captain,who is revealed to be the person shot Eddie in the leg,crippling him for life.
帮我看有没有语法错误,我感觉有,
It is the second person that impressed me most among the five people he meet in Heaven,the Captain,who is revealed to be the person shot Eddie in the leg,crippling him for life.

帮我看有没有语法错误,我感觉有,It is the second person that impressed me most among the five people he meet in Heaven,the Captain,who is revealed to be the person shot Eddie in the leg,crippling him for life.
meet 改为met
who is revealed 改为who was revealed

两个小错:
the five person he met in Heaven
the person who shot Eddie