请帮我修改一下英语作文,讲城市和乡村生活的区别.好处坏处和共同点.life in a city is very comfortable ,there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city .we can go anywhere by car ,taxi or bus.on weekends,we often

请帮我修改一下英语作文,讲城市和乡村生活的区别.好处坏处和共同点.life in a city is very comfortable ,there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city .we can go anywhere by car ,taxi or bus.on weekends,we often
请帮我修改一下英语作文,
讲城市和乡村生活的区别.好处坏处和共同点.
life in a city is very comfortable ,there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city .we can go anywhere by car ,taxi or bus.on weekends,we often go to the park to relaxed.city life is not only very conventied but also very comfortable .
country life has some differences to city life.people who in the country have to work everday ,they(自己做饭种菜怎么说 - -.) by themself.If they want to visit their neighborhood ,thy only can ride bicycle or by foot .
Through there are many differences between city life and country life,there are some (相同点怎么说 - -.) too.
共同点要写不同点,提示词 是getting better ,keeping fit
I woud like city life rather than country life,because i prefer to have a comfortable life.

请帮我修改一下英语作文,讲城市和乡村生活的区别.好处坏处和共同点.life in a city is very comfortable ,there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city .we can go anywhere by car ,taxi or bus.on weekends,we often
Life in a city is very convenient. There are various kinds of restaurants and apartments in the city . We can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus. On weekends, we can go to the park to relax. City life is not only convenient but also very comfortable .If we have money, materials and services are readily available.
On the other hand, country life is a bit different. Country people have to work everyday ,they have to grow food for themselves and cook their own meals. If they want to visit other people living afar , they can only ride bicycle or on foot .
Though there are many differences between city life and country life,there are some common points too. People can keep fit no matter where they live. People in the city can do exercise in parks or in gymnasiums while country people can exercise through their daily life.
People receive equal education opportunity no matter they live in city or in country.
However, I would prefer city life than country life because I prefer to have a more comfortable life.

life in a city is very comfortable , there are kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city 。 we can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 on weekends, we often go to the park to relax ourselves。cit...

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life in a city is very comfortable , there are kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city 。 we can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 on weekends, we often go to the park to relax ourselves。city life is not only very convenient but also very comfortable 。
country life has some differences from city life。 people who in the country have to work everday ，they cook their meals(自己做饭种菜)by themself。 If they want to visit their neighborhood , they only can ride bicycle or by foot 。
Through there are many differences between city life and country life，there are some same points(相同点) too.
共同点要写不同点, 提示词 是getting better , keeping fit
I woud like city life rather than country life, because i prefer to have a comfortable life。

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1.life in a city is very comfortable , there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city.
(...., there are many kinds of restaurants)
2.we can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 on w...

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1.life in a city is very comfortable , there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city.
(...., there are many kinds of restaurants)
2.we can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 on weekends, we often go to the park to relaxed.
(..., to relax （to 后接V原)
3.city life is not only very conventied but also very comfortable.
(用not only 引导倒装会更好 Not only is city life very conventied but it also very comfortable).
4. country life has some differences to city life(介词to改为from)
5.自己做饭种菜They plant and cook by themselves
6. on foot 走路
7,共同点 With the development of technology and society, life both in cities and countries are getting better. They can affoard to attend school and hospital. What's more, there are many fitness facilities for them keeping fit regularly.

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