大家帮我看看这篇英语短文有没有问题Riding the horse on the grasslandDuring the trip,I also had an unforgettable experience:riding the horse on the grassland.It was the first time that I should ride the horse alone.The horse which woul

大家帮我看看这篇英语短文有没有问题Riding the horse on the grasslandDuring the trip,I also had an unforgettable experience:riding the horse on the grassland.It was the first time that I should ride the horse alone.The horse which woul
大家帮我看看这篇英语短文有没有问题
Riding the horse on the grassland
During the trip,I also had an unforgettable experience:riding the horse on the grassland.It was the first time that I should ride the horse alone.
The horse which would be ridden by me was a brown and beautiful horse.And,it was very small,it was the smallest horse I have ever ridden.At first,I was afraid of falling down from the horse.I was very nervous and couldn’t draw myself up.But,after nearly half an hour for practicing,I knew how to ride a horse.I began to ride the horse and enjoyed the warm sunshine happily.
I had a good time on the grassland.What a happy life the people there have!
The end of the summer holiday
Summer holiday will be finished soon.The homework has almost finished.During the summer holiday,I learnt a lot,broaden my mind by travelling and help others by doing the voleenteer work.Now,it’s the end of the summer holiday,a new term is coming.The first thing of the new term is the test which can detection our homework.
I hope I can have an interesting new term.Let cheer for it!

大家帮我看看这篇英语短文有没有问题Riding the horse on the grasslandDuring the trip,I also had an unforgettable experience:riding the horse on the grassland.It was the first time that I should ride the horse alone.The horse which woul
Riding the horse on the grassland
During the trip,I also had an unforgettable experience:riding the horse on the grassland.It was the first time I rode the horse alone.
The horse which would be ridden by me was a brown(and去掉) beautiful horse.And,it was very small,it was the smallest horse I have ever ridden..At first,I was afraid of falling down from the horse.I was very nervous and couldn’t draw myself up.But,after nearly half an hour for(of) practicing(practice),I knew how to ride a horse.I began to ride the horse and enjoyed the warm sunshine happily.
I had a good time on the grassland.What a happy life the people there have!

问题不大，请采纳！

我大概看了一眼，可能不太细致，但应该没有问题，望采纳哦

practicing也可换成practice
我没看出其它问题。
写得可以。

提几个建议……
the horse I rid was brown and beautiful .What's more, it was so little that I never rid a smaller .
learn to 比know 更强调“学会”的意思
I had learnt to ride a horse .
结尾太刻意了，换一个自然点的。