英语演讲稿纠错,希望大家看看有没有语法错误以及用词正不正确What are we livingfor? This is a standing dish but hard to answer. Lack of other people’scare, Jang Tae-san lives aimlessly. He joins the gangster organization,wan

英语演讲稿纠错,希望大家看看有没有语法错误以及用词正不正确What are we livingfor? This is a standing dish but hard to answer. Lack of other people’scare, Jang Tae-san lives aimlessly. He joins the gangster organization,wan
英语演讲稿纠错,希望大家看看有没有语法错误以及用词正不正确
What are we livingfor? This is a standing dish but hard to answer. Lack of other people’scare, Jang Tae-san lives aimlessly. He joins the gangster organization,wandering in the by-lane all the time and not minding the title of gangster. Hesays: “I live merely for not dying.”One day, he learnsthat he has a 7-year-old daughter he has never known. His ex-girlfriend has trackedhim down because the little girl has leukemia and desperately needs a bonemarrow transplant. When a blood test shows that he could save her life, hesuddenly has a purpose for living. He must save his daughter’s life.At that time,however, the gang boss, who colludes with a parliamentarian in order tomake a profit illegally, changes his life again. He is framed for murder andeven he is in the detention house, the gang boss wants to kill him.After a traffic accident on the way to the prison, he tries to escape.His life goalbecomes clear. In order to ensure the bone marrow transplant to run on the railand prove his innocence, he struggles desperately for the first time in hislife while being hunted by both the police and a ruthless assassin.Fortunately, the procuratorand the police gradually trust him and give aid to him. Thanks to these justpeople, the gang boss and the parliamentarian is arrested and Tae-sansucceeds in giving his daughter a second life.

英语演讲稿纠错,希望大家看看有没有语法错误以及用词正不正确What are we livingfor? This is a standing dish but hard to answer. Lack of other people’scare, Jang Tae-san lives aimlessly. He joins the gangster organization,wan
没有语法错误,很好.
　　就是在最后加一个结尾（closing sentence）就更好了!
‍　　祝你演讲顺利!

写得很好，只有个别错误，详情如下：
What are we living for? This is a standing dish but 【删除but】 hard to answer. Lack of【改为Devoid of或Without】 other people’scare, Jang Tae-san lives aimlessly. He joins the gangster o...

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写得很好，只有个别错误，详情如下：
What are we living for? This is a standing dish but 【删除but】 hard to answer. Lack of【改为Devoid of或Without】 other people’scare, Jang Tae-san lives aimlessly. He joins the gangster organization【改为He joins a gang】,wandering in the by-lane all the time and not minding the title of gangster. He says: “I live merely for not dying【改为I live merely for myself】.”One day, he learns that he has a 7-year-old daughter he has never known【改为met】. His ex-girlfriend has tracked him down because the little girl has leukemia and desperately needs a bone marrow transplant. When a blood test shows that he could save her life, he suddenly has a purpose for living. He must save his daughter’s life.At that time,however, the gang boss, who colludes with a parliamentarian in order to make a profit illegally, changes his life again. He is framed for murder and even he is in the detention house, the gang boss wants to kill him.After a traffic accident on the way to the prison, he tries【改为manages】 to escape.His life goal becomes clear. In order to ensure the bone marrow transplant to run on the rail and prove his innocence, he struggles desperately for the first time in his life while being hunted by both the police and a ruthless assassin. Fortunately, the procurator and the police gradually trust him and give aid to him. Thanks to these just people【改为fair-minded people】, the gang boss and the parliamentarian is【改为are】 arrested and Tae-san succeeds in giving his daughter a second life.

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One day, he learns这里应该用过去式吧，one day有一天，过去的事情了