帮忙英语短文改错,只能修改十处.In October 13,2011,Wang Yue,a tow-year-old little girl,...帮忙英语短文改错,只能修改十处.In October 13,2011,Wang Yue,a tow-year-old little girl,is playing on the street.Unfortunately,a small ve

帮忙英语短文改错,只能修改十处.In October 13,2011,Wang Yue,a tow-year-old little girl,...帮忙英语短文改错,只能修改十处.In October 13,2011,Wang Yue,a tow-year-old little girl,is playing on the street.Unfortunately,a small ve
帮忙英语短文改错,只能修改十处.In October 13,2011,Wang Yue,a tow-year-old little girl,...
帮忙英语短文改错,只能修改十处.
In October 13,2011,Wang Yue,a tow-year-old little girl,is playing on the street.Unfortunately,a small vehicle rushed by and ran over the young gitl.Therefore ,aftre brief stopping,a vehicle continued driving .Then a secoed vehicle struck the girl again and rushed by without stopping .At least 18 people passedthe serious injured girl before finally an old woman was later discovered to be making a living by collecting rebbish came to her rescue.After 8 day＇s struggle in hospital ,Wang Yue was died and left us forver.The incident has started heated discussions both at home or abroad ,leaves everyone deep in thought .

帮忙英语短文改错,只能修改十处.In October 13,2011,Wang Yue,a tow-year-old little girl,...帮忙英语短文改错,只能修改十处.In October 13,2011,Wang Yue,a tow-year-old little girl,is playing on the street.Unfortunately,a small ve
1.in改为on
2.两岁的表达方式是two-year-old
3.第二句的女孩单词拼写错误,为girl
4.aftre改为after
5.第二个交通工具,“第二个”拼写错误,为second
6..受伤严重的secious,此处改为副词,加ly
7.woman后面加who
8.垃圾的英语为rubbish
9.forver改为forever
10.leaves改为leaving

On October 13，2011
a two-year-old little girl,was playing
Therefore , aftre brief pause, the vehicle continued driving .
Then the other vehicle struck the girl again and rushed by withou...

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On October 13，2011
a two-year-old little girl,was playing
Therefore , aftre brief pause, the vehicle continued driving .
Then the other vehicle struck the girl again and rushed by without pause.
At least 18 people passed the seriously injured girl
before an old woman who was making a living by collecting rebbish came to her rescue.
After 8 days' struggle in hospital , Wang Yue passed away.
The incident has started heated discussions both at home or abroad ,leaving everyone deep in thought .

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