帮我找出这两篇英语作文有没有语法错误如果有,帮我纠正.My National Day's planNational Day is coming.Here's my National Day 's Plan.I will have a visit to Beijing for five days.Then I will go to the Great Wall take Photos,and i w

帮我找出这两篇英语作文有没有语法错误如果有,帮我纠正.My National Day's planNational Day is coming.Here's my National Day 's Plan.I will have a visit to Beijing for five days.Then I will go to the Great Wall take Photos,and i w
帮我找出这两篇英语作文有没有语法错误如果有,帮我纠正.
My National Day's plan
National Day is coming.Here's my National Day 's Plan.
I will have a visit to Beijing for five days.Then I will go to the Great Wall take Photos,and i will go tothe TianAn Men Squre see the Chinese national flag.At the noon.I will go to the restaurant have lunch.At the afternoon,I will go back the hotel.
Next day,we also goto visit the city.I'm going to have many delicious foods.and I will read the books.At the afternoon,I will have a good rest.
This is my National Day's plan.I hope i will have a good time.
I konw this city
I'mthe Cinese girl.I live in Guangzhou.Guangzhou is the beautiful city.There are many beautiful places and flowers.
Guangzhou very famous places is Baiyun Hill.Baiyun Hill is the big hill.There are many people go sightseeing for Baiyun Hill.
The city flower of Guangzhou is
.The flower of Guangzhou is very much.T love Guangzhou all flower.Because the flowers are very beautiful and cute.So i like all the flowers.
In winter ,Guangzhou is won't snowy.But weather is very coid.People want wear more warm clothes.All plants are fade.
I like Guangzhou,because Guangzhou is very interesting and beautiful.
I prlde myself live in Guangzhou.

帮我找出这两篇英语作文有没有语法错误如果有,帮我纠正.My National Day's planNational Day is coming.Here's my National Day 's Plan.I will have a visit to Beijing for five days.Then I will go to the Great Wall take Photos,and i w
第二段：你很不习惯用to.第二段掉了几个to来表示目的的.to take photos,to see the chinese national flag,to have lunch,go back to the hotel.这些to都不可以少的!at noon之间不需要the,应该用in the afternoon.
第三段：next day前面需要the用来特指第二天.have some delicious foods to eat.read books之间不需要the.
第六段：I'm a Cinese girl.the换成a.the是特指了的,Guangzhou is a beautiful city,the也要换掉.
第七段：也许你是想表达广州几个最著名的地方是白云山,你可以这样说：one of the most famons places in guangzhou is baiyun hill.第二句你是要表达白云山是最大的山还是仅仅表达白云山只是个大山呢?前者你就把big改成最高级biggest,是后者你就把the改成a.第三句你是要表达有很多人在白云山观光是吗?你可以说：there are many people going sighting in baiyun hill.
后面不知道你要说什么.
总之很无语,请多注意a与the的用法以及不定式的用法