英语作文改错,求助!Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store in Changan road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on . At first it is low b

英语作文改错,求助!Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store in Changan road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on . At first it is low b
英语作文改错,求助!
Dear sir,
Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store in Changan road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on . At first it is low but gradual it becomes louder and louder. To wake the matter worse, it even stopped working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend . please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thank you very much.

英语作文改错,求助!Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store in Changan road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on . At first it is low b
1.buy 改bought 2.shape前加the 2.make a noise(加a)3.turned 前加is 4.gradual 改为gradually 5.stopped改为stops 6.disappointing改为disappointed 7.people 改为person 8.be at home(加be) 9.to here删掉to
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Dear sir,
Last year I bought a refrigerator in your store in Changan Road. We all like the shape of the refrigerator. Recently, I found there was something wrong with it. It always make noise when...

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Dear sir,
Last year I bought a refrigerator in your store in Changan Road. We all like the shape of the refrigerator. Recently, I found there was something wrong with it. It always make noise when it turned on. At the beginning, it was low, but gradually the noise became louder and louder. To wake the matter worse, it even stopped working sometimes. We all feel disappointed. I am writing to ask for your help. Would you please ask a staff to repair it? I will be at home this weekend. Please call me before you come here. My telephone number is 66065531, Thank you every much.

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Dear sir,
Last year I bought a refrigerator in your store in Changan Road. We all like the refrigerator.But recently I find something is wrong with it. It made noise when it is turned on . ...

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Dear sir,
Last year I bought a refrigerator in your store in Changan Road. We all like the refrigerator.But recently I find something is wrong with it. It made noise when it is turned on . At first it was low but gradually it becomes louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even can't work sometimes. We all feel disappointed. I am writing to ask for help. Would you please send someone to repair it? I will be at home this weekend . Please call me before you come here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thank you very much.

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Last year I bought a refrigerator in your store in changgan road. We all like (the)shape of the refrigerator. And recently I(found) something wrong with it. It (began) to make noise when it was turned...

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Last year I bought a refrigerator in your store in changgan road. We all like (the)shape of the refrigerator. And recently I(found) something wrong with it. It (began) to make noise when it was turned on . At first (the noise) (was) low but(graudally) it becomes louder and louder. To(make) the matter worse, it even stopped working sometimes. We all feel(disappointed). I (write a letter to )you to ask for your help. Would you please let some one to repair it? I will stay at home this weekend . please call me before you come here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thank you very much.

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是短文改错填空，还是改掉作文句子
我中和了一下~~
Dear Sir:
Last year,i bought a regregerator from your store where in chang'an road for my family.
We all like the shape of the regrigerator.
...

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是短文改错填空，还是改掉作文句子
我中和了一下~~
Dear Sir:
Last year,i bought a regregerator from your store where in chang'an road for my family.
We all like the shape of the regrigerator.
But ,i find somthing go wrong with it recently,it began to mke noise when turned it on.
At first,The noise is low but gradually becomes louder and louder.
What's make the matter worse,the regrigerator is even stopped working sometimes.
We are feel disappointed.
I am writing to you for help.
Could you send a professional people to repair the refrigerator.
i will stay home this weekend.
Please notice me before your people come here.
My telephone number is 66065531. Thank you very much.

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