英语 看一下这个句子有没有错 The CD you lent me helped me pass the exam which was important to me.I am thinking about sending it to you for it’s really of great significance for you,

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英语 看一下这个句子有没有错 The CD you lent me helped me pass the exam which was important to me.I am thinking about sending it to you for it’s really of great significance for you,

英语 看一下这个句子有没有错 The CD you lent me helped me pass the exam which was important to me.I am thinking about sending it to you for it’s really of great significance for you,
英语 看一下这个句子有没有错
The CD you lent me helped me pass the exam which was important to me.I am thinking about sending it to you for it’s really of great significance for you,

英语 看一下这个句子有没有错 The CD you lent me helped me pass the exam which was important to me.I am thinking about sending it to you for it’s really of great significance for you,
总体上没什么问题,最后一个for改为to好点.
PS:个人觉得这样句子既啰嗦又繁琐

  更准确的表达,参考如下:

  The CD you lent to me helped me pass an important exam. I am returning it to you for it’s also of great significance to you, too.

  你借给我的CD帮我通过了一次很重要的考试。我真准备换给你呢,毕...

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  更准确的表达,参考如下:

  The CD you lent to me helped me pass an important exam. I am returning it to you for it’s also of great significance to you, too.

  你借给我的CD帮我通过了一次很重要的考试。我真准备换给你呢,毕竟它对你而言也很重要。

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从语法上看不出什么问题,不过你这句子很怪。是要写作文吗?表达上有点啰嗦啊!
我觉得英语写的好,就是用最的简单词句准确表达你的意思。
这个句子可以写成:
I am thinking about giving back the CD I borrowed from you which helped me pass the exam, because I think it sh...

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从语法上看不出什么问题,不过你这句子很怪。是要写作文吗?表达上有点啰嗦啊!
我觉得英语写的好,就是用最的简单词句准确表达你的意思。
这个句子可以写成:
I am thinking about giving back the CD I borrowed from you which helped me pass the exam, because I think it should be important to you too.

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这句话没有错。个别地方我觉得还是需要完善一下:The CD you lent me helped me pass the exam, which was important to me. I am thinking about sending it to you, for it’s really of great significance to you,

I passed the exam using the CD you lent me ,now I would like to give it back to you.