谁能帮我改一下这篇英语六级作文?In recent years,there is a general tendency that more and more children begin learning English at an early age.There are different opinions among people.Some people suggest that learning Eglish at an earl

谁能帮我改一下这篇英语六级作文?In recent years,there is a general tendency that more and more children begin learning English at an early age.There are different opinions among people.Some people suggest that learning Eglish at an earl
谁能帮我改一下这篇英语六级作文?
In recent years,there is a general tendency that more and more children begin learning English at an early age.There are different opinions among people.Some people suggest that learning Eglish at an early age is right,others,however,hold the opposite opinion.
My own experience tells me that children should begin learning Eglish at an early age.The reasons are obvious.If a child begins learning Eglish at an early age,his Eglish would be very well when he growed up,but if he begins learning Eglish when he is a middle school student,then his learning of Eglish would be harder and harde than before.Some people claim that learning Eglish at an early age would have a bad effect on learning Chinese,but I dont't think so.In my opinion,the method of learning Eglish is very important,if we have the right methods,that situation wouldn't happen.
For all the reasons above,it is evident that children should begin learning Eglish at an early age.
那个~是帮我改一下（不是翻译）,具体一点,主要是语法错误什么的.

谁能帮我改一下这篇英语六级作文?In recent years,there is a general tendency that more and more children begin learning English at an early age.There are different opinions among people.Some people suggest that learning Eglish at an earl
In recent years,there is a general tendency that more and more children begin learning English at an early age.There are different opinions among people about the phenomenon.Some people claim that learning Eglish at an early age is right,others,however,hold the opposite opinion
My own experience tells me that children should begin learning Eglish at an early age.The reasons are obvious.Generally speaking,if a child begins learning Eglish at an early age,his Eglish would be better than that begins in late age. Some people may claim that learning Eglish at an early age would have a bad effect on learning Chinese,but I dont't think so.In my opinion,the method of learning Eglish is very important,if we have the right methods,that situation wouldn't happen.
For all the reasons above,it is evident that children should begin learning Eglish at an early age.
整体上不错,语法基本上没有错误.只是稍有瑕疵.
那个suggest,做动词用有两个常见的意思,一个是建议,后面接虚拟语气.想必你很清楚,第二个是“表明”,相当于indicate.
中间的陈述感觉有些许冗杂,所以冒昧地改了一下,请勿见怪.
希望对你有所帮助.