作业帮这几句话的语法对不对?Green Tea---a refreshing,naturally,aromatic tea.It canhelp with disease-fighting and it can increasing your life time.
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这几句话的语法对不对?Green Tea---a refreshing,naturally,aromatic tea.It canhelp with disease-fighting and it can increasing your life time.
这几句话的语法对不对?
Green Tea---a refreshing,naturally,aromatic tea.It canhelp with disease-fighting and it can increasing your life time.
这几句话的语法对不对?Green Tea---a refreshing,naturally,aromatic tea.It canhelp with disease-fighting and it can increasing your life time.
Green Tea, which is refreshing, natural, aromatic, can help fighting disease and increasing your life time.
首先有一点,就是refreshing, natural, aromatic这几个词都应该是形容词,所以不能用naturally.其他的你的也可以,只是一般都不那样说,用一个定语从句就好了.注意要有逗号.
不大对头，这样说会更好一点：Green tea,which is refreshing ,naturally,aromatic,can help fight disease as well as increase your life span.
呵呵，献丑了。
Green Tea, a refreshing, naturally, aromatic tea, can help fighting disease and increasing your life time.
这样就对称而且挺和谐的.
原句：Green Tea---a refreshing, naturally, aromatic tea. It canhelp with disease-fighting and it can increasing your life time.
修改意见：1.将naturally换成natural;
2.将it can increasing your life time换成longevity。
Green tea,which is refreshing ,naturally,aromatic,can help fight disease as well as increase your life span.
Green Tea---a refreshing, naturally, aromatic tea.
（改：a refreshing, natural and aromatic tea.) It can help with disease - fighting and it can increasing your life time. (改：It can help to fight against disease and increase your lifetime.)