初二英语作文 帮我改下语法Our feelings are changing all the time.Many things around us my affect our feelings,such as colors、environment、mood and so on.I think the weather can affect me most.someone may dislike rainy,but i don't dislik

初二英语作文 帮我改下语法Our feelings are changing all the time.Many things around us my affect our feelings,such as colors、environment、mood and so on.I think the weather can affect me most.someone may dislike rainy,but i don't dislik
初二英语作文 帮我改下语法
Our feelings are changing all the time.Many things around us my affect our feelings,such as colors、environment、mood and so on.I think the weather can affect me most.
someone may dislike rainy,but i don't dislike ti.When it rains,the air will be fresher,and behind it,it may be have a rain bow hang in the sky,how beautiful!AO i like rainy.I also like sunny.The sun shine brightly may make me happy,and the dark in my dark may leave,ang i may study or work better.I don't like windy ,because in windy,many things will affected,such as if the net line broke in windy ,then they can't mend it because of strong wind.So i don't like windy.
That;s the reason whhy weather affect my feelings.Would you like to share your feelings about the weather with me?
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初二英语作文 帮我改下语法Our feelings are changing all the time.Many things around us my affect our feelings,such as colors、environment、mood and so on.I think the weather can affect me most.someone may dislike rainy,but i don't dislik
Our feelings are changing all the time. Many things around us affect our feelings,such as colors、environment、mood and so on.I think the weather can affect us the most.
Someone may dislike the rain,but i do not hate it.When it rains,the air would be refreshing,and may be a rain bow would hang in the sky.How beautiful would that be!So I might say how i like the rain.I also like the sunshine.The bright sunshine would make me feel happy,because the darkness may not exist at this time. I could study and work better.In addition to this,I don't like the wind ,because when it winds,many things would happen ,such as the spider webs would break and spiders can't produce new weds for the strong wind.That's why i don't like the wind.
That is the reason why I think weather affect our feelings the most. Would you like to share your feelings about the weather with us?
题目可以是I think the weather affect our feelings the most.
情态动词使用有问题,冠词使用有问题.我已给你修改,请仔细看看,

Our feelings are changing gradually. Many things around us may affect our feelings,such as color、environment、the mood and so on.I think the weather can mostly influence me .
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Our feelings are changing gradually. Many things around us may affect our feelings,such as color、environment、the mood and so on.I think the weather can mostly influence me .
someone may dislike rainy days,but i don't think so.When it rains,the air will be fresher,and after which it may have a rainbow hanging in the sky,how beautiful!so i like rainy days. and I also like sunny days.The bright sunshine may make me happy,and the dark will leave.all of these make me study or work better.I don't like windy days,because of its effect on so many things.for example. if the net line broke in windy days ,workers can't repaire it because of strong wind.So i don't like windy days.
That's the reason why weather affects my feelings. Would you like to share your feelings about the weather with me?
你还小，请仔细对照我给你修改过的文章。我是模仿初二学生的语法写的。
当然，现在建议不会很多，毕竟这只是开始，你可以留下你的QQ，有空再帮你看看其他的。

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Why Weather Affect My Feelings
Our feelings are changing all the time. Many things around us affect our feelings,such as weather，colors,environment,mood and so on.I think the weather can affect...

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Why Weather Affect My Feelings
Our feelings are changing all the time. Many things around us affect our feelings,such as weather，colors,environment,mood and so on.I think the weather can affect me most.
Someone may dislike rainy,but I like it.When it rains,the air will be fresher.And then there will be a rainbow hanging in the sky.How beautiful it is!Oh, I like rainy! I also like sunny.The bright sunshine can make me happy,so the darkness in my mind will be gone,and I will study better.However,I don't like windy .Because in a windy day,many things will be affected.For example, once the netline broke down in such a day ,they couldn't be mended owing to a strong wind.Therefore I don't like windy.
That is the reason why weather affect my feelings. Would you like to share your feelings about the weather with me?

我是根据我所学的给你改的，可能会有改的不对的地方，你将就点看吧……
我觉得初中生写成这样水平的作文已经很不错了，在格式上只要稍微注意一下字母大小写和标点的运用就行了。在语法上，要注意两个分句的时态要保持一致，灵活得运用动词的被动语态。

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