英语改正句子Supported by his academic research,Professor Salovery suggests that when predicting someone’s future success,their character as measured by EQ tests,might actually matter more than their IQ.此句有错吗 简要分析

英语改正句子Supported by his academic research,Professor Salovery suggests that when predicting someone’s future success,their character as measured by EQ tests,might actually matter more than their IQ.此句有错吗 简要分析
英语改正句子
Supported by his academic research,Professor Salovery suggests that when predicting someone’s future success,their character as measured by EQ tests,might actually matter more than their IQ.
此句有错吗 简要分析

英语改正句子Supported by his academic research,Professor Salovery suggests that when predicting someone’s future success,their character as measured by EQ tests,might actually matter more than their IQ.此句有错吗 简要分析
这是个多重复合句,句中有一处错误,以下是拆分后的分析：
1.主句：Professor Salovery suggests that ...
注意,主句中的谓语动词是表示建议的 suggests,后面 that 引导宾语从句中的的谓语动词需要用虚拟语气表示个人意愿.
2.their character as measured by EQ tests might actually matter more than their IQ.
但是,宾语从句的谓语动词用了 might matter,而不是虚拟语气要求的 should matter 或省略should 直接用 matter,应该改为：
* their character as measured by EQ tests should actually matter more than their IQ.
或者：
* their character as measured by EQ tests actually matter more than their IQ.
3.分词短语作原因状语：Supported by his academic research,
* 分词短语用作状语需要与主句中的逻辑主语保持正确的逻辑关系.如果是主谓关系,需要用现在分词表示.如果是动宾关系,则用过去分词.
* 显然,此处的的动词 support 的逻辑主语是 Professor Salovery,也就是说教授得到他的学术研究支持,说明是动宾关系,因此这里使用过去分词是正确的.
4.时间状语：when predicting someone's future success,
when + 分词短语 = when Professor Salovery predicts someone's future success 的省略,该成分的用法不存在错误.
更正如下：
Supported by his academic research,Professor Salovery suggests that when predicting someone's future success,their character as measured by EQ tests,should actually matter (或者省去 should 直接用 matter) more than their IQ.

might---should 建议的后面需要用should 加动词原形

Supported by his academic research, Professor Salovery suggests that when predicting someone's future success, his character as measured by EQ tests, might actually matter more than his IQ.
从句里someone's和their搭配不一致，从句里的their应改成his。

their-his

这句话与原文不同的就是“their character as measured by EQ tests”里少了个逗号，应该是their character， as measured by EQ tests，其它都没错~

不错