英语作文语法检测,My Winter HolidayTime flies,the winter holiday is over.The winter holiday is from January 7th to February 24th,it has forty-eight days.I get up very late.I usually get up at nine o’clock.Then I have breakfast.I often eat br

英语作文语法检测,My Winter HolidayTime flies,the winter holiday is over.The winter holiday is from January 7th to February 24th,it has forty-eight days.I get up very late.I usually get up at nine o’clock.Then I have breakfast.I often eat br
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My Winter Holiday
Time flies,the winter holiday is over.The winter holiday is from January 7th to February 24th,it has forty-eight days.
I get up very late.I usually get up at nine o’clock.Then I have breakfast.I often eat bread and eggs,drink some milk.I read some books after breakfast.I have lunch at my grandfather’s home.At two o’clock in the afternoon,my mother goes to work,I do my home -work.I have supper at seven o’clock.In the evening,I play on the computer.I go to sleep late.
During the Spring Festival,I feel very happy.I visit my uncles and aunts.I get some luck money.
Next term is coming,I well work hard.I well listen to the teachers in classes.I must do anything carefully.
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英语作文语法检测,My Winter HolidayTime flies,the winter holiday is over.The winter holiday is from January 7th to February 24th,it has forty-eight days.I get up very late.I usually get up at nine o’clock.Then I have breakfast.I often eat br
My Winter Holiday
Time flies,the winter holiday is over.The winter holiday is(was) from January 7th to February 24th,it has forty-eight days.
I get(got) up very late.I usually get(got) up at nine o’clock.Then I have(had) breakfast.I often eat(ate) bread and eggs,drink(drinking) some milk.I read some books after breakfast.I have(had) lunch at my grandfather’s home.At two o’clock in the afternoon,my mother goes (went)to work,I do(did) my home -work.I have(had) supper at seven o’clock.In the evening,I play (played)on the computer.I go (went)to sleep late.
During the Spring Festival,I feel(felt) very happy.I visit (visited)my uncles and aunts.I get(got) some luck (lucky)money.
Next term is coming,I well(will) work hard.I well(will) listen to the teachers in classes(class).I must do anything carefully.

首先，时态就不对。因为文章讲的是寒假里的事，而寒假已经过去了，所以要用一般过去时。从“The winter holiday was over."开始，到"I got some luck money"，这些句子的谓语动词都应该用过去式。另外，第一句话可以改成"How time flies" .最后几句话中的well应该改成will....

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首先，时态就不对。因为文章讲的是寒假里的事，而寒假已经过去了，所以要用一般过去时。从“The winter holiday was over."开始，到"I got some luck money"，这些句子的谓语动词都应该用过去式。另外，第一句话可以改成"How time flies" .最后几句话中的well应该改成will.

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My Winter Holiday
Time flies, the winter holiday has been over. The winter holiday is from January 7th to February 24th, it have forty-eight days.
I get up very late. I usually get up at nine ...

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My Winter Holiday
Time flies, the winter holiday has been over. The winter holiday is from January 7th to February 24th, it have forty-eight days.
I get up very late. I usually get up at nine o’clock. Then I have breakfast. I often eat bread and eggs, drink some milk. I read some books after breakfast. I have lunch at my grandfather’s home. At two o’clock in the afternoon, my mother will go to work and I will do my homework at that time. I have supper at seven o’clock. In the evening, I am playing on the computer. I go to sleep later
During the Spring Festival, I feel very happy. I visit my uncles and aunts and get some lucky money.
Next term is coming, I will work hard. I will listen to the teachers in classes. I must do anything carefully.

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